Wish I could help you with the beta, but time is not my friend just now. I could take a quick read-through to see if anything jumps out at me - usually spelling, incorrect names, wrong person attributed for a speaking role, etc. are the types of things that jump for me on a quick read. You might want to try and contact a couple of them old LC'ers directly. I'm not sure how many of them read through here regularly any more.
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Date: 2017-02-02 07:17 pm (UTC)- Erulisse (one L)