[The DM is wincing though, but not at your skill in portraying that final moment.]
I should have noted that this was posted with apologies to the Dark Muse for bringing up unpleasant memories.
Is this the one I have been privileged to read on the LC?
Yup. AND, for what it's worth, I'm thrilled to announce that I've almost finished the next chapter of that piece, and should have it up for concrit/comment within the next few. My own, new "Dark Muse" has been sitting on my shoulder, whispering some of the most amazing/awful things into my ear.
And I agree; I have never seen that particular character done with any depth or understanding at all. And now, hopefully, with our exchange here we have created some intrigued readers who'll be waiting for it when it comes out. :-D
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I should have noted that this was posted with apologies to the Dark Muse for bringing up unpleasant memories.
Is this the one I have been privileged to read on the LC?
Yup. AND, for what it's worth, I'm thrilled to announce that I've almost finished the next chapter of that piece, and should have it up for concrit/comment within the next few. My own, new "Dark Muse" has been sitting on my shoulder, whispering some of the most amazing/awful things into my ear.
And I agree; I have never seen that particular character done with any depth or understanding at all. And now, hopefully, with our exchange here we have created some intrigued readers who'll be waiting for it when it comes out. :-D